04-06-2015, 12:37 PM
Ell,
"intotonne" has three syllables, in to tonne (pronounced tone).
I placed it here mainly to see if anyone said anything about the meter (primarily ballad without the rhyme), the rhyme is of course incidental. However I am proud of "aued," "auld," and "gaude."
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Ray wrote: "No sayin's I din't ta' liken"
Well of course you do, it sound just like you, but you are such an equivocator. So where does that leave us? As far as I can see, it leaves us in a swamp in the middle of a five year drought. Talk about an M calling an N melodramatic, ha! But thanks for given it a read. xoxoxoxo
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TimeOut,
Thanks for your comments. Very perceptive on the language connection.
Dale
"intotonne" has three syllables, in to tonne (pronounced tone).
I placed it here mainly to see if anyone said anything about the meter (primarily ballad without the rhyme), the rhyme is of course incidental. However I am proud of "aued," "auld," and "gaude."
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Ray wrote: "No sayin's I din't ta' liken"
Well of course you do, it sound just like you, but you are such an equivocator. So where does that leave us? As far as I can see, it leaves us in a swamp in the middle of a five year drought. Talk about an M calling an N melodramatic, ha! But thanks for given it a read. xoxoxoxo
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TimeOut,
Thanks for your comments. Very perceptive on the language connection.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.

