03-29-2015, 09:43 AM
try and be more specific, in the serious forum it's mainly in depth feedback, i'd suggest hanging around mild and novice with the feedback for a while till you get a taste for it./mod
I liked some of the imagery eg clouds catching bare-armed trees. Very descriptive and rich. Overall, the poem has the ability to draw the reader in. However, I felt that I was left hanging (and not necessarily in a good way) by the ending. It was somewhat of an anticlimax for me personally, although that is just my opinion. Slightly too vague - left wondering what it was all about. Overall, I liked the feel/tone/imagery but felt there was a certain "missing element" ... (apologies I can't be more specific!)
I liked some of the imagery eg clouds catching bare-armed trees. Very descriptive and rich. Overall, the poem has the ability to draw the reader in. However, I felt that I was left hanging (and not necessarily in a good way) by the ending. It was somewhat of an anticlimax for me personally, although that is just my opinion. Slightly too vague - left wondering what it was all about. Overall, I liked the feel/tone/imagery but felt there was a certain "missing element" ... (apologies I can't be more specific!)