trash man
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(03-24-2015, 11:15 AM)first_high_of_the_day Wrote:  Hi.
Yes, trash man?
They call him.
Trash man they call him.
Too close to curbs in the suburbs,
He exchanges middle class trash, for low class food stamps.
Too close to the scraps in food scraps.
Trash man they call him.
They call him.
Trash man. Thanks.
Bye.
Terse verse reversed. Not a lot in it...good or bad. Twenty seconds to write...right? I can beat that. The middle line does not need a comma. Title moot. Crit? 15 seconds.
Bye,
tectak
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trash man - by first_high_of_the_day - 03-24-2015, 11:15 AM
RE: trash man - by bena - 03-24-2015, 11:28 AM
RE: trash man - by tectak - 03-24-2015, 11:29 PM
RE: trash man - by summermoose - 03-25-2015, 12:17 PM
RE: trash man - by SaddestStates - 03-26-2015, 05:09 PM
RE: trash man - by Erthona - 03-27-2015, 01:03 AM



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