03-12-2015, 09:04 AM
Why doesn't the second line rhyme? I keep wanting the meter to be even throughout the poem. as well as the syllables. Too anal. I know.
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Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.01. billy. Thanks to all who helped
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Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.01. billy. Thanks to all who helped - by tectak - 03-12-2015, 08:22 AM
RE: I, of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.0. Thanks to all who helped - by just mercedes - 03-12-2015, 09:04 AM
RE: I, of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.0. Thanks to all who helped - by tectak - 03-12-2015, 04:57 PM
RE: Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.0. Thanks to all who helped - by billy - 03-12-2015, 05:33 PM
RE: Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.0. Thanks to all who helped - by tectak - 03-12-2015, 06:15 PM
RE: Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.01. billy. Thanks to all who helped - by billy - 03-13-2015, 11:42 AM
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