Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.01. billy. Thanks to all who helped
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There came deep breathing, giants sleeping; distant dirge that filled the air.
Late light lay long upon  the heathland; carmine garb in folded layers.
Like smoke, a squall of warning weather smeared the bright horizon's line.
Tearing clouds rose red and spread; grey linen laved in altar wine.
Erupting fire, the sky split open; rakish rays fanned wide around.
Up came the wind in wailing rage; down hurled hard rain but soon the sound
of peening on parched ground sank silent. Water drenched the darkening fell.
Dragons chased around the heavens; baleful beasts, the hordes of Hell.
The giants, angered, rose from slumber; thunderously they hailed my name.
They called out Storm, they called out Deluge; but I am fury...Hurricane!
tectak
2015 rewrite.
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(Originally from Metaphysics. "Storm 1987. The UK hurricane". Uncompleted: ran out of semicolons tongueincheek .Apologies to leah. Took back fury Smile Thanks ambrose, lost blast. Thanks billy, untied your tongue)
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Of the Storm-1987 Edit 2.01. billy. Thanks to all who helped - by tectak - 03-12-2015, 08:22 AM
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