Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy)
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Leah, thanks for the errors, I'll correct them. Yeah, its and it's sometime slips by me sometimes, although I am having difficulty find the "it's" you are talking about - aha found and corrected, same with Chronos. Both good catches, thanks again.

"the universe permeates" is an inversion. Yes and corrected. Thanks again.

"it is the unglue that permeates throughout the universe"

I appreciate the effort but the "wind down" suggestion I think I will pass on Smile

Thanks again,

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-10-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne) - by rayheinrich - 02-10-2015, 04:56 PM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne) - by Erthona - 02-11-2015, 02:31 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Leah S. - 02-12-2015, 06:43 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-12-2015, 08:56 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Leah S. - 02-12-2015, 09:46 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-12-2015, 12:16 PM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by tectak - 02-12-2015, 08:04 PM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-13-2015, 05:02 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-13-2015, 08:20 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by tectak - 02-19-2015, 08:19 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-19-2015, 12:03 PM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by tectak - 02-19-2015, 04:49 PM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-20-2015, 04:39 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Leah S. - 02-20-2015, 08:38 AM
RE: Time (edit .001 - Leanne, Billy) - by Erthona - 02-20-2015, 10:14 AM



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