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County Fair
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02-07-2015, 12:04 PM
Hi 71 - I really like the first two stanzas - your imagery is strong, and it takes me into the scene beautifully; although my memories are different, it's the same county fair. I feel that your last stanza lets them down - in fact, is it needed? It feels like a postscript to me.
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County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-06-2015, 12:49 PM
RE: County Fair - by Erthona - 02-07-2015, 06:56 AM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-07-2015, 11:29 AM
RE: County Fair - by just mercedes - 02-07-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-08-2015, 01:51 AM
RE: County Fair - by Tiger the Lion - 02-07-2015, 12:31 PM
RE: County Fair - by Erthona - 02-07-2015, 12:36 PM
RE: County Fair - by ABennett - 02-13-2015, 05:53 PM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-14-2015, 08:27 AM
RE: County Fair - by Brownlie - 02-15-2015, 03:45 PM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-19-2015, 12:54 PM
RE: County Fair - by ellajam - 02-19-2015, 09:00 PM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-20-2015, 06:35 AM
RE: County Fair - by Brownlie - 02-19-2015, 02:13 PM
RE: County Fair - by leftovernachos - 02-20-2015, 10:20 AM
RE: County Fair - by 71degrees - 02-23-2015, 04:10 AM
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