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02-01-2015, 05:35 PM

H I am not sure about this. It is difficult to comment. It seems to be thrown on paper quickly and has no substance. Also I do not understand it much. Perhaps you could relook at it. I cannot make it work or comment further.

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Bullet Train - by tmanzano - 01-30-2015, 02:42 PM

RE: Bullet Train - by tectak - 01-30-2015, 05:30 PM

RE: Bullet Train - by tmanzano - 02-06-2015, 03:15 AM

RE: Bullet Train - by Brownlie - 01-31-2015, 01:50 AM

RE: Bullet Train - by monmac - 02-01-2015, 05:35 PM

RE: Bullet Train - by februarious - 02-06-2015, 08:59 AM

RE: Bullet Train - by tmanzano - 02-06-2015, 02:04 PM

RE: Bullet Train - by leftovernachos - 02-20-2015, 09:58 AM

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