The Hungry General
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I think the E's don't really make a particular accent come to mind but I think they make an earlier time come to mind. My grandfather never spoke about the war he fought in but for some reason your poem brought him to mind. Maybe the manner of speech. I liked this poem, nice and simple and easy to understand. I really like the butchers bill line.
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The Hungry General - by paranoid marvin - 11-16-2014, 12:48 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by MajestyApollo - 11-16-2014, 04:59 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by gypsyrose - 11-16-2014, 05:30 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by Brownlie - 11-16-2014, 03:05 PM
RE: The Hungry General - by paranoid marvin - 11-17-2014, 01:58 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by nb - 11-18-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by vagabond - 11-18-2014, 11:19 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by FilĂ­ocht - 11-21-2014, 03:14 AM
RE: The Hungry General - by Rustymetal - 01-28-2015, 04:27 PM
RE: The Hungry General - by Erthona - 01-28-2015, 05:44 PM
RE: The Hungry General - by RiverNotch - 01-28-2015, 11:25 PM
RE: The Hungry General - by Brenkin - 01-29-2015, 01:44 AM



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