01-27-2015, 11:07 PM
Even though the rhyme scheme may be unnoticeable until pointed out, I wouldn't ditch it unless you found yourself sacrificing something else for its sake. Sometimes those underlying techniques add to the appeal of a poem even if the reader does not know why at first.
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