(inspired by the newbi love poems)At First Sight
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auk, auk!

I like the double dactyl that starts each line followed two feet of trochee. Very nice.

dale the approving
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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RE: (inspired by the newbi love poems)At First Sight - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 02:28 AM



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