Love's illusion

[milo]

Love's illusion

I sat on high, above the earth, in the night sky.

what is the difference between sitting 'high' and sitting '/on/ high'?

I am not sure I have that answer really.. I used it as an expression that came to mind and felt right. That's all the thought i really gave it.

I think it would help if you went through and really thought about every word and expression to consider whether it makes the poem stronger or whether it makes the poem weaker.

Thanks for posting.