spindrift

spindrift

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01-01-2015, 06:24 AM

I like this poems creaticreationg of longing. It works well without being forced. I think it comes from the line about the heating and I disagre with a previous poster who said too much wasn't necessary there. I think it fits perfeperfectly

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spindrift - by srijantje - 12-08-2014, 11:17 PM

RE: spindrift - by ellajam - 12-08-2014, 11:33 PM

RE: spindrift - by srijantje - 12-09-2014, 12:45 AM

RE: spindrift - by ChristopherSea - 12-09-2014, 05:05 AM

RE: spindrift - by Erthona - 12-09-2014, 05:11 AM

RE: spindrift - by srijantje - 12-09-2014, 05:54 AM

RE: spindrift - by just mercedes - 12-09-2014, 06:33 AM

RE: spindrift - by dwestmor - 01-01-2015, 06:24 AM

RE: spindrift - by Erthona - 01-01-2015, 11:00 AM

RE: spindrift - by srijantje - 01-03-2015, 02:55 PM

RE: spindrift - by Leah S. - 01-04-2015, 03:22 AM

RE: spindrift - by srijantje - 01-04-2015, 06:32 PM

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