12-31-2014, 05:58 PM
(12-14-2014, 10:56 AM)Voker101 Wrote: I too also write my poems originally as "wraps." I like how your poem gives a really ambiguous mysterious vibe to the audience.This not critique. It is a gratuitous comment on you you you. Write something meaningful or useful or puposeful.Mod.
(12-31-2014, 12:57 PM)itsjustjess Wrote: Hi, Trollgirl!Welcome. Please avoid commenting on yourself. This is not critique of the poem.Mod.
I'm super new too
For me, I'm all about feeling the words, and I liked how you conveyed your frustration and hope that people will understand you with the language you used. I definitely have felt the same way.
