12-21-2014, 02:39 PM
Ah yes, this one. Seems as I have already critiques this, so I don't see much cause to do so again. I will say, again. Whatever allusion you are making with "Brontes" I assume you mean Brontës, must be incredible obscure, so it really should be foot noted. I have never in my life, and I am 57, seen anything that looked like " rotten, egg-yolk light dropping through the sky". If that is supposed to be a description of lightening, it is by far the most bizarre description I have ever stumbled upon. That should not be taken as a compliment. Well, enough. I'll let Tom have a bit of your egg sky omelet.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.