Love poems edit 1.0 leah S.0.0001 erthona
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(12-21-2014, 03:52 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Just following along. I wonder if "suffice" is closer to your meaning anyway. Good luck.
To leah and tiger.
I don't know if you noticed....apologies if you did...but the line spins on "love of words" NOT "words of love". Implication?...That poetic wordiness, though likely sincere, does not entice your lover. Words of love might Smile Hence use of entice. It is calculated....but if it fails it is my fault.
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tectak
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RE: Love poems - by Leah S. - 12-21-2014, 01:08 AM
RE: Love poems - by tectak - 12-21-2014, 02:12 AM
RE: Love poems - by Leah S. - 12-21-2014, 03:16 AM
RE: Love poems - by tectak - 12-21-2014, 03:19 AM
RE: Love poems - by Leah S. - 12-21-2014, 03:40 AM
RE: Love poems - by Tiger the Lion - 12-21-2014, 03:52 AM
RE: Love poems - by tectak - 12-21-2014, 05:38 AM
RE: Love poems edit 1.0 leah S. - by Erthona - 12-21-2014, 09:41 AM
RE: Love poems edit 1.0 leah S.0.0001 erthona - by just mercedes - 12-22-2014, 04:01 AM



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