12-14-2014, 11:43 AM
I'm thunderstruck. Soooo wonderful. Since this is in serious, I'll give it a crit, but I'll do it in a particularly tailored, not-super-long way 
If I can--it feels like editing a diary, and I worry any edits would briquette all of the rich, warm life in it . . .

If I can--it feels like editing a diary, and I worry any edits would briquette all of the rich, warm life in it . . .
A yak is normal.

