12-13-2014, 05:57 AM
I can't fix anything just now, because your loss is so poignant and painful. The last line is loaded with multiple meanings.
We expect galahs to last nearly as long as we do -- this must have been a horrible shock. I'll come back and suggest a few punctuation fixes but that'll most likely be all.
We expect galahs to last nearly as long as we do -- this must have been a horrible shock. I'll come back and suggest a few punctuation fixes but that'll most likely be all.
It could be worse