Eyeing Light in Darkness

[tectak]

I like this, and I dsagree, with the previous comment about :
'One day I peered into the mirror'
Being a bad opener.
It's not necessarily a 'once upon a time' prefix to the poem. If this was used to suggest a sudden change, I personally found it effective. ??

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