Eyeing Light in Darkness
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I like this, and I dsagree, with the previous comment about :
'One day I peered into the mirror'
Being a bad opener.
It's not necessarily a 'once upon a time' prefix to the poem. If this was used to suggest a sudden change, I personally found it effective. ??
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Eyeing Light in Darkness - by jsoutiere92 - 12-08-2014, 04:28 AM
RE: Eyeing Light in Darkness - by tectak - 12-11-2014, 02:17 AM
RE: Eyeing Light in Darkness - by Jzara - 12-11-2014, 03:36 AM
RE: Eyeing Light in Darkness - by tectak - 12-11-2014, 04:31 AM



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