spindrift

[ChristopherSea]

What I love about the poem is the word 'spindrift.' It is quite visual, with lovely sonics, and it has some onomatopoeia working for it too. There is an intriguing contextual pun in your poem with the play on ‘spindrift’ longing within its own line and the pun on 'spendthrift' which echos back to the expense of winter heating bills on the line before it. Cool, even if coincidental. /Chris