Sobriety Chip

[Brownlie]

Swollen eyeball reality jarring me -- I'm not sure about swollen eyeball reality. It seems awkward to me. I awoke (awake, whatever tense you want I suppose) to swollen eyeballs yet again (though you don't really need yet again) or possibly I was jarred awake by swollen eyeballs.
awake. I blacked-out in the same
position as yesterday screaming -- Maybe a comma after yesterday. You could also include a detail that implies this cyclical phenomenon. Perhaps your body is imprinted on the futon.
politics into ears half deafened by -- I don't really like ears half deafened (just my opinion). Maybe this message can be conveyed more concisely.
Jim Morrison on repeat screeching
I did it again, I don’t know where
I am. Bevies of 40 ounce gut-rot
clank, a phlegmy attempt to rise
from tattered futon feebly. Lonesome -- rise from tattered futon feebly feels awkward
like a foreigner I trip, finding that
damn sobriety chip. Two sprawled
nudes croak, a jackhammer
sputters outside. -- This is not such a bad ending.

The details on the images aren't too bad and the ending is not bad. However, some of the language seems a little cluttered. Sorry if my critique is a little vague.