11-15-2014, 04:08 AM
(11-14-2014, 08:19 AM)Istuk5 Wrote: I like way you wrote it, I think that you're very talented and you should continue with this... Can't wait for new poems... Just try to add more rhyme to your poems and they'll be perfect!!!Hi Istuk5 This type of feedback doesn't give anything to the poet, a basic form feedback would be to say one thing you liked and why and one thing you disliked and why. Please make your comments about the poetry. Mod
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