Blue note #1

Blue note #1

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Andy Kaufman

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11-11-2014, 04:38 AM

Like a box of matches,
all stricken, burnt to fingers
This is how it feels
after folly lingers.

A little rewording and it won't need to sound odd. A sensible idea is there.

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Blue note #1 - by twinked - 11-10-2014, 08:53 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by purplejupiter - 11-10-2014, 09:35 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 03:56 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by twinked - 11-11-2014, 04:13 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:22 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by Albatross - 11-11-2014, 04:23 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:35 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:38 AM

RE: Blue note #1 - by Paint with words - 11-11-2014, 04:14 PM

RE: Blue note #1 - by billy - 11-11-2014, 05:27 PM

RE: Blue note #1 - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 05:41 PM

RE: Blue note #1 - by azure - 11-15-2014, 08:27 AM

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