11-11-2014, 04:35 AM
The first stanza as you have it is the strongest. Word it a bit differently and it can work. The rest doesn't have much going for it so far.
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RE: Blue note #1 - by purplejupiter - 11-10-2014, 09:35 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 03:56 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by twinked - 11-11-2014, 04:13 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:22 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by Albatross - 11-11-2014, 04:23 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:35 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by rowens - 11-11-2014, 04:38 AM
RE: Blue note #1 - by Paint with words - 11-11-2014, 04:14 PM
RE: Blue note #1 - by billy - 11-11-2014, 05:27 PM
RE: Blue note #1 - by GerryMattia - 11-14-2014, 05:41 PM
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