11-11-2014, 04:23 AM
I can not give you recommendations about poetry to read since i am so new to it, i can only give you my thoughts of your poem. I like the feeling of hopelessness, when you connect the feelings of demons in the nighttime with less hope of a dawn then the last dark period. That is at least my interpretation.
To me the first and last verses don't connect as good to the feeling of the poem as a whole as the two in the middle. Maybe one line in the last verse can refer to the first verse or so.
Otherwise great poem!
To me the first and last verses don't connect as good to the feeling of the poem as a whole as the two in the middle. Maybe one line in the last verse can refer to the first verse or so.
Otherwise great poem!