Missing

[purplejupiter]

I love the reliability of this poem and the fact that it immediately evokes the desperation in loving someone so much. I think that your message may be a little bit stronger if you actually cut back on the word "missing" a bit. I know that is what you are going for, but it would be so much more powerful in creating the sense of emptiness if you left with a single, isolated word at the end as opposed to the repetition of the actual word "missing".