Tryst

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The slag adjusted her bodice Now, without the mirror, it really creates more anticipation. Having mirror suggested that she was alone and already reflecting. It is better now that we figure it out at the end. 
at his cottage in the countryside.
Raindrops swelled and rolled
down the mud wall a clump of wildflowers
wilted, and left behind a tainted remnant
from the monsoon of his warm breath. Yes, monsoon suggests a longer time. It raises good questions. Is she slag because of what eventually happened? Or has she been all the timie? Did he expect something different at the beginning or later on? Whose decision it actually was to end it? Having slag in the beginnig and monsoon at the end make a good, open framework.