Poles
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(11-04-2014, 12:07 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Poles
Sorry about the state of the igloo; Wouldn´t "Sorry about the igloo" be enough? It works well this way, but the "state" somehow disturbs me.
it's been a polar bear of a day As Requiem said, nicely done here.
and I am cold.
 
I've managed to scrape
blubber to burn through the night 
if we can find a spark. The story ain't over, right? Nice ending, pointing to the not-yet unresolved conflict.

Nice poem, I like especially the contrast between mess in the igloo and yet sucessful blubber-scraping, and blubber-having and the need/challenge - to find the spark.  
Thistles.
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Messages In This Thread
Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-04-2014, 12:07 PM
RE: Poles - by Requiem - 11-05-2014, 09:11 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-05-2014, 12:28 PM
RE: Poles - by SimikPK - 11-05-2014, 06:16 PM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 04:51 AM
RE: Poles - by SimikPK - 11-06-2014, 05:09 AM
RE: Poles - by spacecoaster - 11-06-2014, 05:51 AM
RE: Poles - by Tiger the Lion - 11-06-2014, 10:53 AM
RE: Poles - by donbouquet - 11-11-2014, 08:38 AM
RE: Poles - by justcloudy - 11-11-2014, 09:39 AM
RE: Poles - by azure - 11-15-2014, 01:31 PM
RE: Poles - by billy - 11-15-2014, 06:12 PM



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