second haiku

[donbouquet]

Haiku for 11/10/14
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a sparrow dips
and holds the sun
in a drop of water

yep, its a run on sentence but I could' t help it!

[bena]

I really like this one. I was going to suggest you drop "and" since conjunctions are just a waste of words in haiku, but I think you need it for the flow.

Great job.

mel.

[srijantje]

why not drop "in a"?