A Cock For Asclepius

A Cock For Asclepius

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#14

11-02-2014, 05:24 AM

Many thanks, Ray.

How about defiled instead of beguiled?

It alters the meaning of that line, but not the intent of the stanza.

And I'm going to change settling in to settling down Smile

It could be worse

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A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-13-2013, 06:04 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by billy - 11-13-2013, 06:15 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by milo - 11-14-2013, 01:11 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-14-2013, 04:18 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by milo - 11-14-2013, 04:23 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by lucentwavering - 11-14-2013, 04:32 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-14-2013, 04:57 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-01-2014, 02:17 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by just mercedes - 11-01-2014, 03:01 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-01-2014, 03:07 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by billy - 11-01-2014, 06:45 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-02-2014, 05:08 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by ray - 11-02-2014, 05:18 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-02-2014, 05:24 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by ellajam - 11-02-2014, 11:10 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by ray - 11-02-2014, 11:11 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-03-2014, 05:39 AM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by Leanne - 11-05-2014, 02:56 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by bena - 11-07-2014, 04:35 PM

RE: A Cock For Asclepius - by just mercedes - 11-05-2014, 03:52 PM

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