Hollow
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While my own writing skills may be inferior to many here, that does not keep me from reading, understanding or noting the weak and strong points of poems. If you read enough on the site I'm sure you could get the hang of it.

If you are not willing or able to comply with the rules of the site, which are basically Give more than, and before you receive, this may not be the right site for you.

(11-01-2014, 11:47 PM)Heyyous Wrote:  because I am unwilling to make a fool out of myself by giving constructive criticism without first knowing how others view my own work. How could I ever help someone with their own poetry if I do not at least have some form of opinion of my own work from them? Nobody has ever in my entire life commented on my poetry and for all I know I could be completely missing certain elements that dictate a thoughtful and well to the point poem.
So I would love to give feedback just as much as I would love to receive it so we can all grow together, However I am unwilling to share my opinions until I have at least an idea of what I need to work on for myself. Thanks for the reply Smile
If you would like to comment on this poem and then link me to one of yours I would feel morally obliged to return the favor & happily do so.
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Messages In This Thread
Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-01-2014, 10:59 PM
RE: Hollow - by ellajam - 11-01-2014, 11:06 PM
RE: Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-01-2014, 11:47 PM
RE: Hollow - by ellajam - 11-02-2014, 12:37 AM
RE: Hollow - by Tiger the Lion - 11-02-2014, 01:11 AM
RE: Hollow - by Heyyous - 11-02-2014, 01:26 AM
RE: Hollow - by billy - 11-02-2014, 03:56 AM



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