Hollow

[Heyyous]

Hello every, I very much like the idea of giving feedback but cannot give any valuable feedback without first getting a feeling for were my own writings currently stand. So with that said I would like to share with you one of my first peoms, It is not the first one I wrote but I feel I conveyed the idea well, However I feel better words could have been used... So please don't hold back because I hate the idea of wasting my time writing poorly.

Hollow
These words have no meaning
Such emotion cannot be contained within the reading

No matter what I choose to write
The birth of my ideas possible to be viewed like the night

Without the proper perception
These words are hollow without intention