10-30-2014, 01:12 PM
(10-30-2014, 11:34 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:You flatter me, squire(10-30-2014, 03:03 AM)Heslopian Wrote: The "human years" is the line which snags at my ear the most. The original line was "time is naught play, a king's dunce!" but I didn't like starting it with a long foot. Thank you billy, ella and ray for your kind and useful commentsxxx
And kudos to you for your elegant and finely woven imagery.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe


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