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A Psalm for Halloween
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10-30-2014, 03:03 AM
The "human years" is the line which snags at my ear the most. The original line was "time is naught play, a king's dunce!" but I didn't like starting it with a long foot. Thank you billy, ella and ray for your kind and useful comments
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"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-29-2014, 12:45 PM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by billy - 10-30-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by ellajam - 10-30-2014, 01:57 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by rayheinrich - 10-30-2014, 02:23 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by rayheinrich - 10-30-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 01:12 PM
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