A Psalm for Halloween
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(10-30-2014, 01:09 AM)billy Wrote:  i stumbled with Where vampires and witches cry, until i read it out loud, and bugger me it's pronounced vamp i ers.
nicely done jack,
Ha, same here, I can see now how it works.

I had trouble with "The human years wilt" also, I naturally say the HUMan years WILT.
Might be just me, and even if it's not, the poem's a good read as is.

Where I live the occasion seems to have lost its religious footing and has historically been used for other purposes, so I appreciated the poem ending on that note.

Thanks for the read.
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A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-29-2014, 12:45 PM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by billy - 10-30-2014, 01:09 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by ellajam - 10-30-2014, 01:57 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by rayheinrich - 10-30-2014, 02:23 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 03:03 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by rayheinrich - 10-30-2014, 11:34 AM
RE: A Psalm for Halloween - by heslopian - 10-30-2014, 01:12 PM



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