10-30-2014, 01:57 AM
(10-30-2014, 01:09 AM)billy Wrote: i stumbled with Where vampires and witches cry, until i read it out loud, and bugger me it's pronounced vamp i ers.Ha, same here, I can see now how it works.
nicely done jack,
I had trouble with "The human years wilt" also, I naturally say the HUMan years WILT.
Might be just me, and even if it's not, the poem's a good read as is.
Where I live the occasion seems to have lost its religious footing and has historically been used for other purposes, so I appreciated the poem ending on that note.
Thanks for the read.
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