10-29-2014, 07:20 PM
it's felt off with a period after wet.
this is one of those instances where line spacing would help out
In the night, the roots are visible,
wet
Shining in my match-lit pipe, Dorado
the same could be done with sky and perhaps elsewhere in order to tweak the enjambment.
this is one of those instances where line spacing would help out
In the night, the roots are visible,
wet
Shining in my match-lit pipe, Dorado
the same could be done with sky and perhaps elsewhere in order to tweak the enjambment.