Virginea Wolfed-'65 Revisited

[tectak]

Well I enjoyed the read. and hesitate to suggest anything = this is already an artifact of your early writing career! Particularly I like 'different cry for lovers with no names' - to me this shows real depression, existentialist welcoming of death.

Did you know you misspelled her name in the thread title?

Thanks merc,
as I am wont to say...there's a lot wrong with this. I found it very enlightening when trying to shoe-horn myself in to the character I once was in order to rewrite it. I can only say it is written by two personas.
Yes...spotted the typo in the title a few days ago. Ain't got round to it yet.
best,
tectak (aged 15 3/4)