10-27-2014, 08:56 AM
Well I enjoyed the read. and hesitate to suggest anything = this is already an artifact of your early writing career! Particularly I like 'different cry for lovers with no names' - to me this shows real depression, existentialist welcoming of death.
Did you know you misspelled her name in the thread title?
Did you know you misspelled her name in the thread title?
