Virginea Wolfed-'65 Revisited

[tectak]

Why are you spelling Virginea with an e anyway?

a woman-child not born until tomorrow.   - I can't work that one out either.

and like a babe she mouths and sucks and swallows  - the line seems too long. I think one of the verbs needs to go

.They leave her like an easter Christmas toy,   - Easter should be capitalised. It's not a very elegant way of saying she's outlived her usefulness.

Holy moses, Reay, that's how she spelled her name, not me
From "doesn't know she's born"....yet.
Yes. It should and it wasn't elegant then or now...but that's how it was

You are right about the line length...it was hard to get it all in.
Best,
and thanks,
tectak