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Compensations
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10-27-2014, 07:32 AM
I like the way you sidle into the main message in your poem - the subject of death is not easy to talk about, especially for a thirteen-year-old. I like the imagery connecting wind and death too. I see your point about awkward parts - death can really be awkward. Not sure you've nailed this yet, though.
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Compensations - by rowens - 10-25-2014, 12:57 AM
RE: Compensations - by billy - 10-25-2014, 02:35 AM
RE: Compensations - by spacecoaster - 10-26-2014, 02:51 AM
RE: Compensations - by lateralus - 10-26-2014, 09:20 AM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 10-27-2014, 05:36 AM
RE: Compensations - by just mercedes - 10-27-2014, 07:32 AM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 10-29-2014, 02:43 AM
RE: Compensations - by SimikPK - 10-30-2014, 04:59 AM
RE: Compensations - by SimikPK - 10-29-2014, 07:58 PM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 10-30-2014, 02:33 AM
RE: Compensations - by SimikPK - 10-30-2014, 03:57 AM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 10-30-2014, 04:15 AM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 10-30-2014, 07:49 AM
RE: Compensations - by SimikPK - 10-30-2014, 08:58 PM
RE: Compensations - by billy - 10-30-2014, 10:53 PM
RE: Compensations - by superfluid - 11-01-2014, 03:37 AM
RE: Compensations - by SimikPK - 11-01-2014, 03:48 AM
RE: Compensations - by sharpietheysay - 11-04-2014, 11:43 AM
RE: Compensations - by rowens - 11-05-2014, 04:51 AM
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