10-23-2014, 06:47 AM
(10-23-2014, 04:46 AM)bena Wrote: Oh dear....for lack of a volta there she goes. Tag! There....I'm snonnet.Working out kinky parts is not normally accomplished by fiddling with one's iambs...but I was much younger then and if it could go it went.
At some point I really should sleep.
It's much improved dear. I'll let those who fiddle with iambic pentameter help you work out the kinky parts....
(I think I do it to make myself laugh as much as anything)
mel
You got the take...what more could I ask?
Best,
tectsk

