10-21-2014, 10:23 AM
(10-21-2014, 08:26 AM)HelloStranger Wrote: -"hey"
-"hey"
Thats how we started,
-"Please stay..."
Now we are departed.
I hope you take this only in jest, but I couldn't help thinking about that one poem--you know--that one poem that appears in, like, so many different bathroom stalls while reading this:
"Here I sit
all broken-hearted
"
I think you can fill in the blanks.
Don't get me wrong, I don't feel that way about this poem.
For me, this poetry didn't really work. It's all tell and no show. Needs more imagery and such.