10-17-2014, 06:01 AM
Ah, cheers Billy. It's not meant to rhyme consistently throughout, so that's cleared that up. Although, with a squinted eye I can get locate it, traces, chased it close enough. I think the introduction of another, a partner, is more of a problem, almost becomes 2 poems. I shall think on it. Thanks for your time.
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