10-09-2014, 12:18 AM
Tamara and Rowens,
I'm going to put on my admin hat for a second. In the Serious Forum please try to expand your comments somewhat. This does not mean necessarily giving a line by line critique, or writing in great detail it just means giving more explanation and depth. The aim is to help the writer improve so please push yourselves harder to give more detail so that they can accomplish that improvement. It's always possible that they may or may not agree with you, but I would encourage both to make the effort to push yourselves. Your critiques as they stand now would be what I would expect to see in the Mild Forum.
Don't take this as a reprimand just a prod to push yourselves harder.
Todd/admin
I'm going to put on my admin hat for a second. In the Serious Forum please try to expand your comments somewhat. This does not mean necessarily giving a line by line critique, or writing in great detail it just means giving more explanation and depth. The aim is to help the writer improve so please push yourselves harder to give more detail so that they can accomplish that improvement. It's always possible that they may or may not agree with you, but I would encourage both to make the effort to push yourselves. Your critiques as they stand now would be what I would expect to see in the Mild Forum.
Don't take this as a reprimand just a prod to push yourselves harder.
Todd/admin
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