In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl
#8
(10-07-2014, 02:25 PM)b.abraham Wrote:  Wow, thanks guys! I can't get over how great this feedback is! I think the next draft is going to be very boiled down. I'm going to read some more stuff elsewhere on forum and get some distance from The Coffeeshop Girl before I post anything new. Can anyone tell me what the etiquette on posting a second draft is? Should I edit my original, post a reply, or start a new thread?
We're encouraged to post the edit(s) above the first draft, so readers can follow the changes. We all learn by this!
Reply


Messages In This Thread
In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by b.abraham - 10-07-2014, 08:47 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by just mercedes - 10-07-2014, 10:50 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by just mercedes - 10-07-2014, 02:48 PM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by simmon - 10-07-2014, 07:57 PM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by Muggler - 10-09-2014, 12:28 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by billy - 10-09-2014, 01:59 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by noname - 11-10-2014, 12:15 PM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by alatos - 02-22-2015, 02:02 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by SameName - 03-02-2015, 12:05 PM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by Hitler - 04-01-2015, 04:15 PM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by bena - 04-06-2015, 07:05 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by Todd - 04-07-2015, 05:36 AM
RE: In Love with The Coffeeshop Girl - by YolaSm - 05-07-2015, 06:55 AM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!