10-04-2014, 06:39 AM
Agave first edit/Dale/Tamara
Look at us –
sitting here like two shots of tequila;
waiting to be understood;
aching to be known
beyond our salt and citrus suits,
to tongues of discerning taste –
anxious of last call.
Original
Look at us –
sat here like two shots of tequila;
waiting to be understood,
aching to be known
beyond our salt and citrus suits,
hoping night falls gently
on shoulders seared by sun.
Look at us –
sitting here like two shots of tequila;
waiting to be understood;
aching to be known
beyond our salt and citrus suits,
to tongues of discerning taste –
anxious of last call.
Original
Look at us –
sat here like two shots of tequila;
waiting to be understood,
aching to be known
beyond our salt and citrus suits,
hoping night falls gently
on shoulders seared by sun.