Tryst

[Tiger the Lion]

The slag adjusted her bodice in front of the mirror
at his holiday home in the country side;period?
raindrops swelled and rolled This line feels like it should be a new sentence.
down the mud wall. A clump of wildflowers
wilted, and left behind a muddied remainder
of the monsoon and his warm breath. I would consider breaking up this line after monsoon

Hi Tamara. I like the feel of this one. The few notes above are mostly personal taste. Thanks for sharing. -Paul