09-26-2014, 08:58 PM
(09-26-2014, 12:45 PM)Tamara Wrote: I am sitting in this quaint tea stall,i changed it to 'a' spider and 'am sitting'.
tinned roof noisy in the January breeze—
a few wooden benches, kettle boiling
in the corner with the brew
and the rising flavor of ginger.
The tea boy comes
with tea in an old glass,
a layer of froth on the top.
I sip watching the Mexican Lilac tree,
its branches spread out like the legs of a spider.
A group of Japanese tourists come in.
One sits next to me and looks at the ground
carpeted with pink petals. He looks at me
starts a conversation and we talk about
Japan and cherry blossoms
'i am sat' , really?
, would it work here?

