Palaver
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(09-26-2014, 12:45 PM)Tamara Wrote:  I am sitting in this quaint tea stall,
tinned roof noisy in the January breeze—
a few wooden benches, kettle boiling
in the corner with the brew
and the rising flavor of ginger.
The tea boy comes
with tea in an old glass,
a layer of froth on the top.
I sip watching the Mexican Lilac tree,
its branches spread out like the legs of a spider.
A group of Japanese tourists come in.
One sits next to me and looks at the ground
carpeted with pink petals. He looks at me
starts a conversation and we talk about
Japan and cherry blossoms
i changed it to 'a' spider and 'am sitting'.

'i am sat' , really? Huh  Big Grin, would it work here?
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Palaver - by Tamara - 09-26-2014, 12:45 PM
RE: Palaver - by billy - 09-26-2014, 06:10 PM
RE: Palaver - by Tamara - 09-26-2014, 08:56 PM
RE: Palaver - by billy - 09-26-2014, 08:57 PM
RE: Palaver - by Tamara - 09-26-2014, 08:58 PM
RE: Palaver - by ellajam - 09-26-2014, 09:02 PM
RE: Palaver - by Tamara - 09-26-2014, 09:13 PM
RE: Palaver - by Tamara - 09-27-2014, 01:01 PM
RE: Palaver - by just mercedes - 09-27-2014, 02:08 PM
RE: Palaver - by Tamara - 09-27-2014, 02:14 PM



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