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09-18-2014, 08:20 PM

(09-17-2014, 04:41 PM)zahrakh Wrote: ummm...is that all, Brownlie?

Well, there also appears to be a dangling modifier which may make the sentence more confusing.

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Ablaze - by zahrakh - 09-15-2014, 04:19 PM

RE: Ablaze - by billy - 09-15-2014, 06:20 PM

RE: Ablaze - by zahrakh - 09-17-2014, 02:40 AM

RE: Ablaze - by Brownlie - 09-17-2014, 02:01 PM

RE: Ablaze - by zahrakh - 09-17-2014, 04:41 PM

RE: Ablaze - by Brownlie - 09-18-2014, 08:20 PM

RE: Ablaze - by Mwaba don - 09-19-2014, 07:27 AM

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